Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 22, 2020
Welcome to the blazing hot Venus
Hi my name is Maia and for literacy I had to answer some questions. For this I
used the old google and put it into my own words. Then I had to put
all of that into a big Venus poem. Do you know about Venus now? I hope
you enjoyed this poem hot right.8
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Maia!
ReplyDeleteI personally love the planet Venus so this post is really interesting to me. Your post is amazing!
Answering those facts must've been difficult. And your poem is really good! I really enjoyed reading it!
Next time maybe explain why you were doing this?
I hope to see you around!
~Jayde